I sit here in the rain
Dreaming of your face,
Thinking of how to cope
Now you’ve gone away.
Within my field of thoughts
All I see is you.
As I stumble around
You reach out your hand.
Now I’m all alone
I don’t know if I can cope,
I just need you by my side.
© RNTomlinson 2009.
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Sounds like song lyrics. Get your gee-tar out. I like the ‘field of thoughts’ idea here.
Funny you should say that because they started out as lyrics indeed.
But I felt this shorted version was of higher quality.